And before you start pointing fingers, maybe you should sort out your own errors.

The other paragraph you highlighted again the author is mocking 'serious writers'. The way he's ordered his prose is written in the style of a tweet and instagram posts. The author is young. This reflects his generation. It's the same when Burgess wrote Clockwork Orange and his use of language when the main character and his droogs were talking.

I think you need to take a step back and fully comprehend what this author has set out to achieve. I think its genius. And boomers simply won't understand.