Can you not use more full stops? Marbles has employed one to great effect, surely, run on sentences that keep going and going and fail to pause than repause, and liberally spreads comma after comma in continuum, despite the viewer or even in spite of the viewer, is a total disregard to reading and making it easy on the eyes, so you should put a bloody full stop in.
And yeah, love the tweet quote. Good on Marbles for taking definitive action. A full stop on her past.